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Phoebe Prince, victim of bullying, verbally abused by people who didn't like who she was dating. The bullies, otherwise known as the harassers, are normally punished by the school when in truth, this is where the law should step in. In the article "Are Bullies Criminals" Phoebe Prince, a girl from Ireland that moved to South Hadley, was bullied to the point where she couldn't take it anymore, she thought suicide was her only answer. Bullies have more than one reason to be criminally punished such as there are laws prohibiting harassment among society, abuse by any means is still abuse and harms the victim more than anyone might think, and if kids are getting off with just a detention, what's to stop them from going right back out there and doing it again? Bullying has gone up in schools despite the efforts of the many that try and stop it. If the law protects the people who can't protect themselves then it should not be limited when they are "just kids."
Phoebe Prince, victim of bullying, verbally abused by people who didn't like who she was dating. The bullies, otherwise known as the harassers, are normally punished by the school when in truth, this is where the law should step in. In the article "Are Bullies Criminals" Phoebe Prince, a girl from Ireland that moved to South Hadley, was bullied to the point where she couldn't take it anymore, she thought suicide was her only answer. Bullies have more than one reason to be criminally punished such as there are laws prohibiting harassment among society, abuse by any means is still abuse and harms the victim more than anyone might think, and if kids are getting off with just a detention, what's to stop them from going right back out there and doing it again? Bullying has gone up in schools despite the efforts of the many that try and stop it. If the law protects the people who can't protect themselves then it should not be limited when they are "just kids."
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Sugar, one of the many words we hear in schools today, but it's almost always fitted with the words "bad for you." Of course sugar is bad for a person but completely cutting schools off from it is not the way to handle the situation. Schools are not responsible for the way children choose to eat, taking away sugar completely is an easy way to get a load of anger from students, and if kids shouldn't be eating something then offer an alternative as well but never take away the thing that helps most teens get through their school day. There are bunches of teens today that use sugar to help them through the day but still don't eat it as a large part of their every day snacks. By taking away sugar, a school is taking away the right a person has to choose how and what they want to eat.
Sugar, one of the many words we hear in schools today, but it's almost always fitted with the words "bad for you." Of course sugar is bad for a person but completely cutting schools off from it is not the way to handle the situation. Schools are not responsible for the way children choose to eat, taking away sugar completely is an easy way to get a load of anger from students, and if kids shouldn't be eating something then offer an alternative as well but never take away the thing that helps most teens get through their school day. There are bunches of teens today that use sugar to help them through the day but still don't eat it as a large part of their every day snacks. By taking away sugar, a school is taking away the right a person has to choose how and what they want to eat.
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Space travel, a dangerous flight into our universe, will now be up to grabs for the rich people of our world who wish to experience it. The people who choose to go up have, what I like to call, lost their minds. With space travel comes a bigger risk factor for illness, problems can occur with the ship, and the people going up have no training. The men and women that have gone up into the darkness that is our universe are trained professionals. Learning something as intricate as spaceflight is difficult and by sending people up, what people once thought were just risks may become reality.
Space travel, a dangerous flight into our universe, will now be up to grabs for the rich people of our world who wish to experience it. The people who choose to go up have, what I like to call, lost their minds. With space travel comes a bigger risk factor for illness, problems can occur with the ship, and the people going up have no training. The men and women that have gone up into the darkness that is our universe are trained professionals. Learning something as intricate as spaceflight is difficult and by sending people up, what people once thought were just risks may become reality.